Wow that is so cool. I loved the describing words. I wish that I could see the smile on your face. You painted a picture in my mind with your story. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for all the comments, Victoria is enjoying reading your thoughts. Could you please comment on other authors work too. They are excited to hear what you have to say about their writing.
Awesome Victoria!!!! I liked the line the egg glittering in the sun! I can picture it in my mind. This is a really great story you are a good writer:) Good work!
hey i was checking out the jouner blog and i came across a wonderful story it was about easter egg hunts the story had lots of info and strong words and that is why i liked the story
hi am from yaldhurst i was checking out the jouner blog and i came across a wonderful story it was about easter egg hunts the story had lots of info and strong words and that is why i liked the story i hope you can i look at my blog it is http://ymsisaacw.blogspot.co.nz/
Great work Victoria! Hi, I'm Lauren from S.H.S. I like all the adjectives you used, and I don't think that any junior can writing like that!
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ReplyDeleteWow that is so cool. I loved the describing words. I wish that I could see the smile on your face. You painted a picture in my mind with your story. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGood Job! I like everything about your story which amazed me. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteWOW!! Victoria I like the Descriptive language that you used.
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WOW!! Victoria I like the Descriptive language that you used.
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Good Job! i liked the story it wowed me great Job
ReplyDeleteFantastic Job Victoria! You used fantastic and amazing wow words. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the comments, Victoria is enjoying reading your thoughts. Could you please comment on other authors work too. They are excited to hear what you have to say about their writing.
ReplyDeleteFantastic Job Victoria! you used fantastic WOW words Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteAwesome Victoria!!!! I liked the line the egg glittering in the sun! I can picture it in my mind. This is a really great story you are a good writer:) Good work!
ReplyDeletelovely work Victoria! I love your fantastic work you have done I love your writing nice work.
ReplyDeletehey i was checking out the jouner blog and i came across a wonderful story it was about easter egg hunts the story had lots of info and strong words and that is why i liked the story
ReplyDeletelovely story you are really good at writhing
ReplyDeletelovely story you are really good at writhing
ReplyDeletehi am from yaldhurst i was checking out the jouner blog and i came across a wonderful story it was about easter egg hunts the story had lots of info and strong words and that is why i liked the story i hope you can i look at my blog it is http://ymsisaacw.blogspot.co.nz/
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